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Clever Mischief Chapter 18: Face Off
by rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
at March 3rd, 2006 (10:30 am)

Clever Mischief, Chapter 18: Face Off
Date: Saturday, September 24, 2005
Location: Fred and George's Room, the Three Broomsticks
Character: Fred and George
Rating: Any Age

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Posted by: selene2 (selene2)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 01:04 am (UTC)

I loved the realistic reactions between the brothers. I feel such sympathy for them both. Fred had such a lovely reaction to finally kissing Hermione... too bad George had to let him know so soon. lol.

I really appreciate the very real emotions that this story has been exploring. I really have to applaud both of you for making this story so fully fleshed out and beautiful.

I am really looking forward to the next installment.
Thank you.

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:40 am (UTC)
Jon Stewart- dance

What we most wanted to do with this fic was to explore the emotions involved in a situation like this, in as realistic a way as possible. We chose to do it in this format, as a livejournal community with updates, because we really wanted to take our time with it and have everything archived in one spot. We're both completely squeeful that this is coming through for you, and that you're enjoying our exploration! Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Posted by: Tanya (silver__luna)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 01:55 am (UTC)

This is so horrible. I love it!Oh poor boys.

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:40 am (UTC)

*g* Thank you!

Posted by: sln1987 (sln1987)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 02:53 am (UTC)
Fred George

Oh no! They are fighting.

Things should work out, it is hard to be away from one's twin for too long.

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:41 am (UTC)
Queen- Mayniac

We hope so ;) Thanks for reading!

Posted by: neespence (neespence)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 03:33 am (UTC)

It's like a really bad car crash. You know that people are hurt and you feel really bad for them, but you just can't look away.

Powerfully written!

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:42 am (UTC)
Gilmore Girls- Luke- Coffee

Thanks so much!

Posted by: Deb (tyskn)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 04:09 am (UTC)
power

*whimpers*

My heart is crushed and breaking (Breaking for them BOTH mind you, and you know that's saying something)....damn what a powerful effect words can have!!! I knew since back when George kissed her that things would come to an explosive head *with the twins, how can you not expect that??* and it was perfectly done. The dialogue was excellent between them.

I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts when she learns that this has driven the twins apart a good bit. It'll hit her hard I imagine. *is such a sucker for well written angst* She's worked herself into a rather tight corner without ever meaning to. The tension's going to drive everyone mad.

*grabs a tissue and scrolls back for the ritual reread*

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:43 am (UTC)
Get Fuzzy- Bucky hammer

Thank you, hon. I'm sure Inell's told you that we're both delighted you're following this and enjoying it! We delving into teh angsty now, so hang onto your hat ;)

Posted by: Clannadlvr (clannadlvr)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 07:13 am (UTC)
HP- gred and forge

Oh, man, this just hurt to read. I really hate to see the boys fighting, but I find it so interesting that it's over Hermione.

I hope they figure out that they can share and share alike!!!

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:43 am (UTC)
General- must be true

Just the reaction this chapter was going for ;) Thanks for reading!

Posted by: poisoned pond (purpledna)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 08:21 am (UTC)
brods

my heart was beating bloody triple time man! and when fred said pack! i was like who what where!?!? no no no.

ahhhh ya.. next chapter before i diiiiiie

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:44 am (UTC)
General- Frodo has failed

*g* Thank you! Of course, we don't want to kill you with this...

Posted by: Rebecca Elizabeth (star_faerie)
Posted at: March 4th, 2006 02:09 pm (UTC)

*blinks* wow...

The tension between them... wow

I think my vocabulary consists mainly of wow at the moment. This chapter was just wow. I guess it had to happen... but poor fred and geororge

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:45 am (UTC)
BtVS- Spike- Kitten poker

Yeah, poor boys. We hope we don't have to make them suffer too much ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Posted by: lyndie578 (lyndie578)
Posted at: March 5th, 2006 05:51 pm (UTC)
Sass

Ouch. Somebody was bound to be hurt sooner or later, but perhaps it will get better soon--pretty please?! Thanks for the post!

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:46 am (UTC)
HP- Bad Fic- Nagini's hands

And thank you for the comment!

Posted by: Katie (mermaidqueen)
Posted at: March 5th, 2006 09:51 pm (UTC)
book faery

"You're three and a half minutes older and you always think that means you get whatever you want. You don't get to have her by default!"

Perfect line.

Posted by: rose_whispers (rose_whispers)
Posted at: March 7th, 2006 04:46 am (UTC)
Faerie- Froud- Dark Lady

Love, love, love your icon. And thank you :D

Posted by: Dr Leezard (lizardspots)
Posted at: March 15th, 2006 06:37 pm (UTC)
Disney: mome raths

Omg, Fred! NOES!! WAH! *runs to next part*

Posted by: alisanne (alisanne)
Posted at: June 9th, 2006 02:08 am (UTC)
Emma

Oh damn.

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